Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Your blog sucks.

When I write
I leave evidence
of that moment.
I do not leave
a lasting definition of myself.

I often read over my pages (or posts) and no longer identify.
Thankful they exist, I still want to delete...
Delete. Delete them from your view.

-------That was a confession-------

There are a billion evidences
of my own bad writing.
But not everyone knows the sound of her own voice.
So I scribble, and hold onto hearing.

1 comment:

David's Holla Atchya! Blog said...

But then you get to see your improvement. In Gospel terms, that's like looking at an old sin and thinking, "I am so wicked!" when really you have repented and changed to be not so wicked. You are a great writer Lyndsi Shae. Does it bother you that I leave comments on ALL your posts?